Great on both parts

the animation was quite good, the voice acting was brilliant. Maybe the animation could be cleaned up a bit for part 2, i'll be looking forward to it

Brilliant...

That is a very fluent, and very well animated piece, not very newground-ish as you stated, but you don't need cock jokes to be successful here, keep it up and try and make something a little longer.

Original

Brilliant idea dude, i really enjoyed this

Great work Hoch Poch! Good to see youre still at it!

Outstanding

Amazing work, reminds me of the anime Karas

Keep it going...

I want to see this after you have worked some more on it, he has an expression like he has been punched in the mouth by a pack of lemons. It's looking great so far, if only you had time to finish it in time.